Marvel Universe User talk:X-man96
Writing text in profiles/bios
X-man96, when writing text please do not make reference to comics (unless it is shown within the actual issue itself). For example, your Gambit edit.
In the most recent issue of X-men the X-men fought Apocalypse face to face. AT one point, they defeated Gambit}} as Death. Gambit's unconscious body was found by Sunfire, who then fled the scene of the battle.
Instead say something like "Most recently the X-Men fought...". We want the text to be written as if you were there watching it happen (not looking at a comic) and telling the story to someone else about those events you seen.
Also be careful of accidentally capitalizing letters that shouldn't be as you did with "AT" and also look for minor mistakes like adding “}}” into your entries. Because of these reasons, your edit to Gambit can not be approved. Feel free to re-write the edit if you'd like. If you have any other questions, please feel free to ask. --DragynWulf 17:17, 20 June 2006 (EDT)
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